Thursday, August 28, 2014

"The Marginal World"


                                                                                                         The Real World 
The sea and the world: one in the same.
       "The Marginal World", written by Rachel Carson, compares the actions of the sea to the spectacle of life. She focuses on her thoughts gained from the experience of visiting "a world that keeps alive the sense of continuing creation and of the relentless drive of life" (Carson 215). While her credibility extends only as far as her visits to the sea, the essay covers her idea of the true beauty and connection to life found in the sea caves, burrows, and chitinous shells of lobsters. Rachel’s purpose in writing a comparison essay is to show the readers the different ways to view life. It is not just a wave of emotions, events, and people; it’s a “varied manifestation [where memories] appear, evolve, and sometimes die out” (Carson 219). She uses vivid imagery to symbolize the ocean to our everyday life. Rachel compares the wide ocean floor to the different times in our life. The flats took on a mysterious quality as dusk approached [where] sanderlings scurried across the beach like little ghosts and birds became only dark shadows, with no color discernible” (Carson 217). The sanderlings simile represents a time of disguise. As humans, we hide, run, and shield ourselves from pain, sorrow, truth, and sometimes, ourselves. The birds symbolize our desperation to not be found in our times of struggle; we blend in with the crowd making ourselves, as Carson said, of no color. Carson does a phenomenal job of illustrating emotion through her connections, imagery, and symbolism. This use of rhetorical devices makes her message understandable to, people of all ages who go through the roller-coaster of life, her audience. The essay flows beautifully as the author successfully makes her point, or purpose, clear to her audience members. Using strategies such as symbolism, comparisons, and imagery to set a serene mood makes this essay a relatable, intriguing piece.

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